The Thinginthecorner arrived quite unexpectedly
One evening,
And made itself at home.
It was an odd, reddish thing,
With fangs, and claws,
But it kept them well hidden.
It slept on an old jumper and never snored.
Never made a sound, really.
It was just… There.
One day, the Thinginthecorner
Began to speak.
But it spoke in a language I didn’t understand,
Although now, it’s hard to forget.
Slowly, we learned to communicate,
And realized that sometimes words lie to us.
We spoke nearly every night,
In our own way.
The Thinginthecorner and I became
Close friends;
It came with me everywhere I went.
It stopped sleeping on the jumper
And slept at the bottom of my bed,
Near my toes,
Instead.
But it dreamed strange dreams,
The Thinginthecorner,
And it kicked me in its sleep.
And its claws,
However well hidden,
Left deep scratches in my skin.
So it sleeps on the floor again,
The Thinginthecorner.
It’s been asleep for a long time.
Maybe it died,
I’m not sure.
But I’ll just leave it near the door,
In case it wants to go
And is too polite to say so.












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Love wasn't the idea, but hey, then again, I never thought of it like that.
Have a gummy for your efforts.
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We didn't give it a mouth so it cannot complain.
I have to disagree with spoonfork, I feel it's quite good as a poem, prose would be to restricting and would call for a rewrite to fit conventions better.
I kinda wants me a Thinginthecorner, if only I could get them outta my head and into my room.
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You learn quite quickly as a postie, just how few people care for their fellows.
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With pulleys and wieghts
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Amazing ending. Brilliant.
Such great work. Can see kids in school assembly chanting this with masks on!!!! It's one of those freaky imaginative story...do you remember "Where The Wilds Things Are"? Or a book like that? That little boy dreams of that island with all the monsters??.....anyway, now I'm rambling...
What is it about? Stray pet? Long lost family member? A ghost of a friend? Monster under the bed? "Drop Dead Fred" kind of imaginery friend??? I'm intrigued.
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I don't do pretty...
This culture demeans us all...
Wow... To have small children in masks chanting my poem... That's the best one can hope for! And I loved Where the Wild Things Are.
I intended it to be about my depression, in a way. I used to cut myself, and felt like the compulsion to do that followed me wherever I went. But it gave me a sense of... I don't know, control, and there was security in that. I guess that's a pretty messed-up way to go about describing it, but it's the best I can do.
Thank you so much for the fave, and your kind words.
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We didn't give it a mouth so it cannot complain.
You're right, it is about addiction.
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We didn't give it a mouth so it cannot complain.
I see what you mean now. What a way to describe depression. That's phenomenal. I used to cut too. Until someone told me it was childish, I have learnt to go wasy on myself. Like, I used to run my wrists up and down our wire fencing about once a week, or just get knives and hack into old scars. I makes you feel better. The pain makes you forget what else you were worrying about. I suppose that's why I loved getting my tattoo so much.
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I don't do pretty...
This culture demeans us all...
Spatulas are good for getting stuff out of your head, just so you know.
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We didn't give it a mouth so it cannot complain.
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